Critique Reflections

In class review:
As I went around to each one of the packages, I wanted to be deliberate and thoughtful in my comments.  I wanted to really provide good, constructive and insightful commentary. I looked at the items for their conceptual view, what the item was that they were selling; whether the package was attractive; I thought about whether it was purchasable? whether it was reusable? I thought about what would make me want to go towards this item on a table of items.


My critique worksheet:
In reviewing the comments that were made on my particular page, I found most to be non-constructive.  When a person states "I wouldn't buy this", it should state why they wouldn't buy it, what was the deficits and what were the merits, so that there can room for improvement.  There was one comment that was highly motivational and it stated "great concept, poor construction".  I found that this one comment alone, was helpful, it stated to me that this person actually got the idea, but understood that there was an issue with execution. 


Overall:
I didn't enjoy the process that much, because I felt as though there needed to be more instructions given to the classmates to really inspect the items for the following:
 - composition
 - concept
 - technique
 - color
 - tone
 - texture
 - lines
 - mediums utilized
 - etc;